Haha hi guys As you all know I'm an amature author working on a few books and hoping to get them published. You can watch these stories progress on my fictionpress page. I feel like I'm shamelessly advertising myself but I really need critic and I figure my friends on here won't just tell me the writing is good. I need ideas and some way to improve. So please check it out and let me know which ones you'd like to see more of! Here is my account
Personally I would like to see more of the hiding in the dark story haha! I love your writing style though! I've been trying to work on mine as well... I get writers block quite often! And sometimes I start a story and then have no idea where I am going with it
And the things left unsaid story is sooooooo good! It's really suspensful and definintly something I would keep reading. But maybe you should go into the minds of the other people Avery mentioned in the video. Like it would be interesting to see what's going on in devins mind during all this!